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Hey, welcome to 4ever 2pm KPOP Fan Fic Reviews. This is where you will be picking up your reviews that you have requested at 4ever 2pm.

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Reviewer: *EunAera*
Site: http://2pmvietguh.blogspot.com/
Requester: JennyIsAineseKiaile
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Title: 4/5

Honestly, it didn't really POP to me. Also, the storyline didn't make it any better. But overall thats good (:

Appearance:8/10
The appearance is too gloomy and doesn't go along with the plot. It makes it seem like a suspense and horror other than whatever it really is suppose to be.

Forewords: 10/10

Very good job at explaining everything (: I love the colorful characters !

Plot: 17/20

Wasn't exciting, yet it was interesting, but not enough to pull me in ya know? Kinda lost me there.

Originality: 20/20

Good Job . Some people just take ideas from other people, but this one seemed original to me.
 
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 13/15

A few mistakes here and there, but the rest was fine.
 
Flow: 4/5
 
Kind of flowed, some parts were just... out there. Like they popped outta nowhere. And some parts were very fragmented and many comma splices.
 
Writing Style: 10/10
 
I love your writing style, its funny yet sophisticated (:
 
Other++ 5/5
 
Great job!
 
Total: 78/100 - Still A C+ (:

DATE:Wednesday, December 29, 2010 TIME:{12:52 PM} COMMENTS:
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