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Shadow of An Angel

Title: Shadow of an Angel
Author: Czakhareina
Reviewer: *EunAeRa*
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/3750/shadow-of-an-angel-2pm-hyunjoong-kimhyunjoong-luna-ss501-taecyeon
Title:5 /5
I liked how it fit with the plot, it was great.

Appearance: 9/10
The appearance is fine, I kind of expected the poster to be fitting perfect [well not perfect] but somewhat as one with the plot of the story, I didn't really like it, but I love the rest 
 
Forewords:10 /10
I have to say that this was very well written. It technically summarized what the story would be like and it was a great lead and hooked me in, wanting me to read more, ya know? It was very great and I loved it. 
 
Plot: 20/20
The plot was very detailed, and I was surprised it was just a one-shot request, turning into a full chaptered novel [to me.] It was very creative and imaginative and creative. 
 
Originality: 17/20
I can't say it was original, since it was from a requester [to the requester] it was very original and put a lot of effort and many details into it. But, [to the writer] As the chapters go, it was well written and very heartfelt. I can still feel the suspense and heart pounding ! I was astounded at your work in chapters and words. It must've taken a good amount out of you. Do you like writing? Because you are very talented my dear ^^  Although, the chapters in the beginning took me in, then I was confused with the introduction of the characters... 
 
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary/Punctuation: 12/15There were a few grammatical mistakes and some spelling errors, but some were not worded well, kind of confusing at times. 
 
Flow: 5/5I think the story flowed well and there were no confusing parts at all. I think that it was perfectly fine with the few exceptions of grammar but that was still fine. It did not interrupt the storyline's flow.
 
Writing Style: 10/10I absolutely love your writing style. I loved everything about this story, the chapters were well written with every single flowing detail. Keep up the good work eh? 

Other++ 5/5
There was many things I have wanted to say, first of all, congratulations on making this story, it was very well written and I might even read more of your stories. They are very intriguing and I hope to hear  from you again!

Total: 93/100

DATE:Tuesday, November 2, 2010 TIME:{6:07 PM} COMMENTS:
Comments:
thanks thank so much....
can i ask about the part "I was confused with the introduction of the characters... "
do you mean confusing about who was helped her when she slipped in the street and who helped her in her front door...?
well the first one was Hyunjoong the 2nd one was taecyeon...

- czakhareina
♥ posted by Blogger czakhareina : November 3, 2010 at 5:22 PM
 

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